Didn't mean to lose control
attempted to be strong
thoughts, tears, emotions
held tightly within
Didn't mean to lose control
when such few words were
spoken
it was just my turn to melt
transform
from solid
into liquid form.
written by Pauline August 19, 2007©
7 comments:
wow.....
beautiful
I do that from time-to-time. Sometimes it's horrid. Other days it feels pretty dang good.
I love the way you put this.
What an eloquent way to explain a melt down! I'm impressed. As usual.
So full of life, feelings, strength, beauty... Pauline,
Thank you. :)
and from liquid into vapour
alas where do thoughts come from
where do those moments & Time GO
all fade & merge into a hazy blurr
vivid, lucid and intense here & now
yet gone like words in the wind - pow!
liquid, malleable, flows, changes shape, transforms. :)
its good to lose control, let things flow and flow with them even if it is tumultuous. :)
as pete said,
wow!! indeed.
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