Tuesday, August 14, 2007

Primitive Pleasure

Water hole
surrounded by trees
better known as a
pond to you and me
a simple rope
hung from a tree
reach
swing
splash
primitive pleasure
at its best
add to this a
little girl
taken from the city
see her smiles
her happiness
at such a
primitive pleasure.
written by Pauline July, 2007

6 comments:

gP said...

beautiful, my sentiments too, i had jumped into rivers from trees, that was a nice experience 20 years ago...sigh...:(

mystic rose said...

mmmmmmmm.. one of the best things in life. :)
sweet, innocent, primitive.

PJ van Zyl said...

and you don't have to be a a girl to enjoy that.;-)
it was fun days

Pauline said...

ghost particle, you can relive the moment, you're not that old.Bring back your beautiful smile with a little innocent fun...

mystic rose, it was wonderful to see her face light up with happiness!I wish I had bee able to capture it on film.

pete, you don't have to be a child either ;)

Charlene Amsden said...

Oh! I saw this entire scene ... beautifully presented, Pauline.

twilite said...

Hi Pauline. What a glimpse to simple joys in life!